Blog #13

After you combine your 3 papers or completed the first half of your novel/creative work, discuss how you created a cohesive reading experience for your audience. For example, what major changes did you need to make after combining the papers? What most needs editing at this point? Where will you go from here?

After combing my three papers I notice many things. I needed to use more transition words and add some more research to my lit review. I also noticed that in my paper some of my paragraph tends to be too long or too short. I need to go in depth a little more with some of my research and explain how I will go about my methodology. The part the needs the most editing is my literate review. I feel like I didn’t use enough sources and I didn’t show enough of the research that I found. Compare to some of the other journals I have been reading lately there lit review seems to be lengthy. From here I feel like I’m on the right track I just need to find more sources and work on my lit review.